Every Other Freckle

Hello  

I like how you detailed the bruises and wounds, and how you did the coloring, which I think is great.
but what I think needs improvement is the armpits, hands, the head and the pose. In my opinion the armpit is too circular, the hands I quite find too big and for the head, it is too rounded again like it is popping out, As for the pose, you could do a bit more of a curve since the top body look like it is actually turning and the bottom body is flat. All you really need to do is to just adjust/fix those parts and i think it would look great. The only advice I can give you is have more references to follow from the bent position of the hands, the shape of the armpit, and how undressing looks. 

but besides all that I still find this great, and what makes the artwork standout is probably the detailed coloring you did on the girl.